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Personal Statement Samples

See how I transform generic, forgettable essays into compelling narratives that capture attention and secure admissions. Every sample demonstrates the care and expertise I bring to each project.

Before & After Transformations

GUtech Scholarship Application 2024

Complete application package with 4 essays

Scholarship Essay: Why I Deserve This Scholarship

A compelling scholarship essay that helped secure admission to top universities including LUMS. Demonstrates academic excellence, resilience, and clear vision for the future.

Scholarship Application
3 min
491 words

Before

"Client shared pointers to write their statement. The statement was completely written by me given the client's instructions and pointers."

After

"Academics have always been a cornerstone of my journey. I have worked extremely hard throughout my school and college life. During my school years, I was named valedictorian of my class and received multiple high achievement awards for my IGCSE and A-level grades."

Scholarship Essay: Contribution to GUtech and Community

An essay showcasing commitment to community engagement and innovation, demonstrating how the student will contribute to both the university and broader society through technology.

Scholarship Application
2 min
400 words

Before

"Client shared pointers to write their statement. The statement was completely written by me given the client's instructions and pointers."

After

"Many of my peers aspire to the American Dream, they look at United States of America as a beacon of light and aim to establish their careers there. However, I have immersed myself deeply in Omani culture and envision my future in this promising country."

Scholarship Essay: How This Scholarship Will Help Achieve Goals

A personal and reflective essay that connects past challenges with future aspirations, demonstrating resilience and clear purpose in pursuing higher education.

Scholarship Application
2 min
321 words

Before

"Client shared pointers to write their statement. The statement was completely written by me given the client's instructions and pointers."

After

"The scholarship will provide me with financial freedom to pursue my ambition of studying a Bachelors in Computer Science alongside minor in Business. I will be able to dedicate my entire time to academics, networking and gaining exposure within the field."

Extracurricular Activities and Experiences

A comprehensive essay detailing volunteer work, internships, and leadership experiences that showcase personal growth and commitment to community service.

Scholarship Application
3 min
659 words

Before

"Client shared pointers to write their statement. The statement was completely written by me given the client's instructions and pointers."

After

"My path through extracurricular activities began with me participating in my school's annual marathon (2018). 'Ready, steady, on your mark, get set, GO!' - I think that while the P.E coach said this phrase particularly for the annual marathon, I applied it to my life from thereon."

Client Success Stories

"Hania transformed my bland personal statement into a compelling story. I got accepted to my top choice medical school!"

Amira K.

Accepted to Johns Hopkins University

Karachi, Pakistan

"She helped me find my authentic voice while making my application stand out. Highly recommend her services."

James M.

Accepted to Columbia University

Karachi, Pakistan

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