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Personal Statement & Essay Editing

Stand out without sounding like everyone else.

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Your personal statement is your opportunity to show admissions committees who you really are. I help you craft a compelling narrative that highlights your unique experiences, demonstrates your potential, and authentically represents your voice. With my background in medical education, I understand what reviewers are looking for and how to make your story resonate.

What's Included

  • Comprehensive structural analysis and feedback
  • Line-by-line editing with tracked changes
  • Tone and voice refinement
  • Hook development and narrative sharpening
  • Two rounds of revisions included
  • Optional 30-minute consultation call

Deliverables

  • Edited document with tracked changes (DOCX)
  • Clean final version (PDF)
  • Detailed feedback notes
  • Before/after comparison document

Turnaround Time

Standard

4-7 business days

Express

48-72 hours (rush fee applies)

The Reality

Do you know what an admissions examiner at an Ivy League or Oxbridge university faces?

They receive thousands of applications each cycle. They review hundreds of personal statements in a single day—sometimes 50-100 statements in just one hour. All competing for just one seat.

They don't have time to dive deep into every statement. They don't have the luxury of reading between the lines. Your application has seconds—maybe 2-3 minutes at most—to make an impact, to stand out from the pile, to capture attention, to make them remember you.

That's where I come in. I'm Hania Waseem, and I help you craft personal statements that don't just tell your story—they command attention from the first sentence, making every second count.

Sample Transformation

Before

"I have always wanted to be a doctor. Since I was young, I knew medicine was my calling. I have worked hard in school and volunteered at hospitals..."

After

"The fluorescent lights hummed as Mrs. Chen clutched my hand, her eyes searching mine for reassurance. In that moment, translating her fears to her physician, I understood that medicine is not just science—it's the privilege of standing with people at their most vulnerable..."

Ready to Get Started?

Let's discuss your project and how I can help you achieve your goals.

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